Saturday, October 31, 2015

TDG 201: Cloud Dream World (2/2)

This 0.5 chapter is for those who have and had kind words to say, for those who defended me in the face mass negativity, and for those who voted for me to continue. Your words help me feel better. This chapter is a thank you, from me to you. :)

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Before Nie Li's return, they wouldn't dare send people to Glory City. Very quickly, news on the appearance of Xiao Lang's six henchmen spread to Xiao Wu, who then detained them for interrogation.

Xiao Wu felt very confused after listening to their report. Why would Nie Li do all that he did? To search for such a long string, was he getting ready to explore the bottom of that ravine?

At the thought of the dark spring and that deep ravine, they couldn't suppress a shiver. They can only hope that Nie Li is a lucky person with a lucky star, and that he will come back alive. Otherwise, if the people from Glory City investigates their tribe, it will be the end of Sky's Fate Tribe. Because they are certain that Nie Li is an important person to the Mayor of Glory City, who knows, he might even be a son of the mayoral house.


Sky's Fate Tribe Bazaar.

As Nie Li walked along, Yu Yan became emotional. Who would guess that she would be able to return to the human world. Although the Human Race have been massacred by the Demon Beasts to near extinction, but at least the humans weren't completely wiped out.

"Elder Sister Goddess, how many humans clans do you think survived?" Nie Li couldn't help but ask.

"I am not sure either," Yu Yan shakes her head. After a long drawn out God's War, humans managed to continue to thriving in their respective countries, but upon the reemergence of a Spirit God of the Demon Beast Clan, the Human Race will meet an almost certain defeat.

After thinking, Yu Yan commented, "Although the Human Race is disadvantaged in a fight with the Demon Beast Clan, it is still impossible for them to completely wipe us out. There are a few Spirit God lineages that are spread around other dimensions. Although there aren't many humans remaining in the main world due to the war, but the Human Race is in control of quite a few other dimensions. They are thriving in those dimensions, and the Spirit Gods of the Human Race created a very tight barrier, with a precious treasure called the Profound Deep-Purple Bamboo as its center. This barrier has been going on for tens of thousands of years, even if all the Spirit Gods of the Human Race pass away, the Spirit Gods of the Demon Beast Clan will still be unable to dream of breaching into those dimensions."

So it turns out that the Human Race still have control of a few other dimensional worlds.

"Within the human race, the strongest bloodline should be that of the Hun Yuan House. There are uncountable warriors of the Lesser God Rank within that House, and they have a portion of the Profound Deep-Purple Bamboo as their Holy Guardian. The Demon Beast Spirit Gods will all meet their end if they were to force their way in. Although we witnessed the breaking of Hun Yuan Spirit God's Godhood with our own eyes, but the Hun Yuan Spirit God was the most covert existence among the Spirit Gods. He could even be looking for a way to revive himself right now." Goddess Yu Yan said thoughtfully.

"Can we enter those other dimensional worlds?' Nie Li quietly asks Goddess Yu Yan.

"Yes, as long as you can find the Cloud Dream Stone and use it to create a Transdimensional Technique to enter the Cloud Dream World. That world is a very independent and complete world, it is very difficult for Demon Beasts to enter. Flowers bloom all season, it is very prosperous and fertile. The only thing about it, is that it is slightly smaller than the main world." answers Yu Yan. As for the Transdimensional Technique to enter the Cloud Dream World, only an extremely small number of the human race Spirit Gods knew, and Goddess Yu Yan was one of them.

A dimensional world controlled by the Human Race is definitely safer than this main world. Also, it is would be more suitable for the human race to live in compared to the Dark Prison World.

It would be much safer if he could move the entire Glory City to Cloud Dream World.

With that thought in his heart, he asks "Where can we find Cloud Dream Stones?"

"To cut off the connection between Cloud Dream World and the main world, the Spirit Gods of the Demon Beast race has already plundered most of the Cloud Dream Stones. At most, there will be one or two stones among the relics of the human race. Before the collapse of my Godhood, I hid a my Interspatial Ring in the main world. That place is roughly ten thousand miles from here. If we can get my Interspatial Ring, then there would definitely be enough Cloud Dream Stones." Yu Yan sighs.

Goddess Yu Yan's Interspatial Ring? Considering her strength, she must have left many good items within that ring during her previous life.

However, ten thousand miles is truly a little too far.

Nie Li began to have hopes and expectations towards the faraway Cloud Dream World. In his past life, Nie Li was only active within the main world. He hasn't been to all these subsidiary dimensional worlds. As for Cloud Dream World, he didn't even hear of it.

"We must quickly leave this place, otherwise we will bring destruction upon the Sky's Fate Tribe." Yu Yan says as though she just thought of something. Once the demons beasts of the dark spring and deep ravine notice her disappearance, they will come hunting for her. Although they have placed an illusion using inscription Techniques, but no one knows when those demons beasts will see through the deception.

"En." nods Nie Li. After appearing at the bazaar to show his face, he quietly leaves.


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Note: 

Sky's Fate Tribe Bazaar : wanted to name it Fair instead of Bazaar but thought that Sky's Fate Tribe Fair would be a little confusing as there could be multiple meanings.

Profound Deep-Purple Bamboo : direct translation - Purple Black-Bamboo or Purple Profound/Mysterious-Bamboo.

Still debating: House vs Family, Technique vs Array (arrays feels so CS to me - I took a CS class before. Would most people get the idea of an Array?)


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28 comments:

  1. I'm confused. Why are you translating this story when someone else already is? And why are you starting at chapter 200?

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    1. I started because I like this story a lot, and didn't know I could not do this. Now however, I am not sure if I would continue. I posted this chapter because I was almost done anyway from my first translation stint, and as a thank you.

      I started at 200 because I didn't want any conflict with the original translator, and readers can enjoy the story from a spoiler perspective.

      I figured considering he earns money from this, and he does 1 chapter a day, while the author releases 2 chapters a day, the original translator will catch up to me, at which point there will be my releases (he can even take them and simply credit me if he wants) for those who are interested. At that point, I will either jump forward by a lot again, or I will simply stop translating. I thought he wouldn't mind. *sigh*

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    2. You go GODDESS StarWish preach it! We true novel readers are your fan!

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    3. Well, whatever floats your boat. I don't really care what you translate. I was just curious.

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  2. dude no idea whats happening ...atleast translate around at 120 or 130

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    1. My perspective: That's not nice to the original translator. Since he earns money, I should start further away, it's safer.

      Thyaeria worshippers: That's an even greater taboo.

      New perspective: I wouldn't want to drive away the original translator.

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  3. Hey thanks for not stopping. I know there's a few fanboys from Thyaeria being negative but I hope you don't stop. No one but the author owns this novel so you should be able to do whatever you want.

    241 votes says you shouldn't stop. The other 36 people should just get banned. I think you should just ban everyone that post negative comments so they don't want to be here.

    Your translations are awesome. Thanks for your hard work.

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    1. so they don't want to be here -> since they don't want to be here

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  4. im all for you too translating this, so thanks! As long as nobody accidentally translates already translated chapters, i think its all good.

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  5. Why don't you just team up with the original translator?
    Release chapters twice as fast

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    1. She tried but he wants to do it his way. And he hasn't said anything negative about it.

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  6. u should translate a similar novel from chapter 1; get less hate and more appreciation

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  7. Thank you so much for continuing! Please don't mind those rude commenters. They are simply born haters with nothing better to do than try to make some one feel horrible.And although they hate it so much, they keep coming for more! lol keep fighting! YOU ARE INDEED OUR TRANSLATOR GODDESS STARWISH!

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  8. Loved the chapter! Thanks for being translating this chapter =)

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  9. I thought the how purpose of him going back in time was to save the city. So he wasn't successful?

    DON'T STOP. Great work!

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  10. We are able to read double or even quad chapters a day! You made that happen, so thanks very much! If I continue to ask for more, I hope your willing to provide them =D

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  11. Well, for those interested in spoilers this is rather good... for those who don't want to be spoiled, they can just refrain from reading I guess...
    I just hope you won't have conflicts with Thyaeria, it could even be awesome to work hand in hand together if you guys can find a compromise.
    Thank you for sharing your work.

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  12. I really don´t think it should be any problem for you to carry on with this novel, you have done everything you could do in your command by offering to work together with the initial translator and he himself cannot blame you for carrying on alone if he is not willing to cooperate.

    I hope you proceed with your translation!

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  13. why not pick a different project?

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  14. Buddy Do Not Disturb, unable to understand what is happening. There are few new characters as well as our hero. But still …...........������

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    1. It seems you didn't read chapter 200. It was said that this is after Nie li left the glory city to travel. He than went and met with a tribe of which he met in his past life and found good treasury there. The new characters of course who would know them if it's your first time seeing them but you should be able to understand whats going on.

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    2. Most of the Xiao-family-name characters here aren't too important. Yu Yan however, will be and is still present in the current storyline so I wanted to introduce her :)

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  15. Questions about the story so far:

    What does Godhead refer to? Yu Yan broke her Godhead. Hun Yuan Spirit God's Godhead broke, too. What does that mean? Is it like Godhood or the quality of being godly? For example, does it refer to getting beaten so badly that they lost their godly powers?

    The Hun Yuan family is the strongest lineage of humans.It mentions that there are uncountable warriors of Lesser God Rank. Is Lesser God Rank the step above Legend Rank?

    In the story so far, has anything been mentioned about the God's War before this?

    Last question: What are the Demon Beast Spirit Gods? Are they like uber powerful Demon Beasts above legend rank?


    Thanks!

    -Reasonable

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    1. Godhead - this was a term I wasn't sure how to translate. It is like the qualifications of of a God, "the essential being of a god".

      Should I translate this as divinity or godhood? I quite like the term godhood, I didn't think of it. Let me change it to godhood, it's a more common word than godhead and thus, makes for a more comfortable read.

      Yes, Lesser God is a step above. :) I'll add the new ranks into the intro/back-story post, and you'll see what spirit gods are. ;) Keep in mind that Thy has the right to change it if he wants to so he might have a different interpretation.

      Nothing new has been mentioned about the God's War.

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    2. Sweet. Thanks for the info. I think godhood is a good choice. Again, I'm really bummed you won't be translating TDG anymore. I was reading one of Thyaeria's latest releases on Wuxia... Had no idea wtf was going on in one section of the post due to poor use of commas and pronouns.

      You only translated a couple chapters, but I already miss your work.

      -Reasonable

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  16. thanks for your translations but can you start translating from chapter120? cause we didnt read that far,and it kind a makes hard to follow. thanks..

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